Colleges Online Courses of Distance Education Degree Programs

Alright, so I just finished my freshman year in college toward a degree in engineering…being interested in engineering (math and science geek), I’m not so great with my English and grammar skills lol. But while I like math, I’m not so great at it, I didn’t pass my Calculus course last semester (just barely), and in turn I can’t take Physics (calc is a pre-req). I want to take Physics over this summer. I am taking Calculus right now and doing much better. But I can’t take Calc and Physics at the same time, unless I receive a waiver from the professor teaching Physics. The following is my e-mail to him, could someone please read through it and let me know if you see something wrong with it’ Thank you very much, I will pick Best Answer (promise!)

Dr. [professor's last name],

My name is [my full name] and I am interested in taking your summer physics course. I initially registered for the class before the end of spring semester. But, I did not pass Calculus 1, and in turn, I was dropped from your course. Currently, I am taking an online Calculus 1 course from USD. The course began May 14th and will end June 22nd. I also plan to take Calculus 2, beginning June 25th and ending August 3rd. I would be very excited if I would be able to take your physics course as well. Is it possible you could allow me a waiver for your Physics 1 summer course’ I am prepared to work hard and put in the time and effort needed to complete these summer courses. Could we set up a time for me to meet with you in your office’ Anytime works for me. Thank you for your time,

[My Name]
I’m kinda worried about unnecessary capital letters and commas..